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So flat
I must surf
The internet
Morning chill
the wind blows
straight offshore
Surfing with a crowd
two fish
and a seagull
Can't make the left
or the right
I let this one go
After surf
opening the car
with numb fingers
* I don't adhere to the 5-7-5 convention so don't bother counting
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New poem from the ride in
On the on ramp
a truck is overturned
now everyone pays attention
too late!