/*23 Breaths: Bad poetry for a rainy day*/

Wednesday, December 29, 2010

Bad poetry for a rainy day

So flat
I must surf
The internet

Morning chill
the wind blows
straight offshore

Surfing with a crowd
two fish
and a seagull

Can't make the left
or the right
I let this one go

After surf
opening the car
with numb fingers

* I don't adhere to the 5-7-5 convention so don't bother counting


Jason Hall said...

that dude looks familiar

pranaglider said...

J - Hope your trip is going well!

New poem from the ride in

On the on ramp
a truck is overturned
now everyone pays attention
too late!

Jason Hall said...

Thanks prana,

things are falling into place

new developments

stay tuned.